TUNE L.S.ME - The Fall From Grace
This track strats off pretty raw. Not alot of padding or effects used to limit the canned sounds of the instruments.
I get the feeling that the "focal" point is the vocals, which is just fine... but a painting is only as good as the canvas.
Meaning, if fades & FX were used on the music bed you lay your vocals over, you would have a much better resonance.
Vocally, you could do better with some variation on the refrain. The "you Knooooooow" parts where you extend your vocals are flat. The Vocoder you run in the background is a very nice touch & adds spice to the track.
I think with some re editing & proper placement you got a really killer song to show for your efforts of labor.
Soild 3 with the hopes you understand what I am tryying to say to you as constructive & not destructive criticisim.